My narrative writing

One day me and my crew went put on a voyage. Us the straw hat crew “FULL SPEED AHEAD” shouted Luffy the captain of the crew “the map is indicating the treasure beyond the storm ahead of us” says the navigator of the crew nami. zoro the right hand man also says “Then lets go Luffy has his mind set so lets go in the storm” so they set sail into the storm so they decided to set sail into the storm that awaited them. When they set sail in the storm it was like wasnt there to being with. When they sailed in it was sunny and if you told a person there was a storm they would think you were crazy. When they got past the thick clouds they saw the big island that contained the treasure they wanted. It was a huge island “we are gonna need lots of supplies” says Nami and everyone agrees but Luffy is already off the ship.

 

They loot around  and when they got supplies they get off the ship and go searching for luffy. While they search for luffy he is running around the island that seems to have no population and all areas have different climates such as sunny,snow,rain and clear. During his exploration the crew finds him and he says “hey guys do you have meat in that large bag im so hungry” and they do so sanji cooks it with some make shift fire and they all eat and walk around following the map but do not get there yet so they deiced to sleep due to the fact it was getting dark.

 

When they wake up zoro and luffy are gone (duh duh duuuuuhhhh) when they wake up they see that zoro and luffy disappeared so they pack up their things and go and look for them Luffy is still exploring the weird island and zoro is lost he is in the clear climate. While Luffy was walking around he sees a ship and it was big mums ship and and he was bored so as soon as she step foot on land he charged at her he was ready for a very long fight but surprisingly when the first punch landed BOOM and she is out cold. The rest of the straw hats hear the explosion and run to it and zoro. when they regroup and where luffy was is close to the treasure.

 

Nami follows the map to a cave that the x Marked so they all run in to the treasure and instead of just a chest the whole cave was full of treasure so they loot as much as they can and eat in celebration and when they hed out they see a kalasaurause and since it was still meat they killed it and dragged it back to the ship where they put the gold on and hopped on the ship and set sail out of the island area leaving big mum and her crew there.

 

When they get out Luffy laughes with zoro and they sail out to outer sea

 

 

Physical description of my Cousin

He has short ish hair and is a normal height for how old he looks. He looks as if he is 12 and is quite big. 

 

His pupils are brown like the small branches of a tree with the outside a Light white. His nails are long and his head is an abnormal shape.

 

His hair is black and kind of short. He has long legs and lots of scars on the front of his leg from his rugby games.

He has white ish and big teeth. He is kind of bulky and 5 ‘7. 

 

My Cousins skin is smooth but also has lots of stuff on his skin as well. His skin is like the colour of a Hazelnut that is still not cracked.

 

You would be able to see he is Tongan. And is Very fit to be a prop when he plays rugby. Speed is Not very his thing but has good legs and Nice strong arms to tackles with when he plays.

Cross country

On Monday it was a big day because we had Cross country. Cross country is when there are heaps of kids running around a school block or field. Which means it is basically a mini marathon for kids.

 

Today when I got to school I was nervous as I wasn’t really ready for cross country today because I’m not very fond of running around my school twice. When I got to class it had just opened and there weren’t that many kids there yet. For me around that kind of time my class would be half full so my guess was people skipped because of cross country.

 

When we were ready to go to the field to start cross country  I was NOT ready at all. When we walked to the field to get ready for the run everyone was hyped. When we got on the field we waited for 9 o’clock to start the races. When it went to 9 the girls lined up and all the boys were  screaming for the girls when they started there was a whistle. Some boys sat on the mat and cheered, some stood but I jumped and cheered along with some other students. When the girls went out the gate we all got quiet and just stood waiting for some girls to be seen from the gates to start screaming louder than dinosaurs again. The first girl we saw on the side gate was Nashima. We all cheered her on. It was only the girls first lap so we didn’t know who was gonna win. I cheered lots for all the girls who walked or ran past the gates that made them visible. When it came to the last couple of girls we cheered them on mostly so we could start racing but to encourage them to finish. 

When the boys started i got,kl excited and nervous for us there was a blow horn when ms Lavakula blew the horn we all ran to where the exit the field and start our 2 laps around the school the first lap was not that hard because the sun wasent shining yet but is still was a little tiring. When I got onto my 2nd lap I got an ice block stick from Ms B to prove I did my 1 lap. When I got on my  2nd lap the sun decided to come out and shine while I got on my 2nd lap.I was really tired but I did try a lot. 

 

When i got to the end  to run the field everyone was cheering me and some others on to make it to the end. When i made it to the end i was happy but very tired